Friday, May 21, 2010

What do you think of this haiku?

Dusk





contrast slips away


red light fades to shades of gray


honeysuckle breeze

What do you think of this haiku?
I really like it


it depicts the hue of dusk


how clever you are
Reply:I love the imagery and the addition of a pleasent scent. Very calming.
Reply:This is a perfect little gem that follows all rules regarding form and content. Now, write one for us in Japanese.
Reply:its a little weird to be honest but it doesn't matter wht I think
Reply:I like it. It reminds me of a desert sunset.

flowers funeral

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