Dusk
contrast slips away
red light fades to shades of gray
honeysuckle breeze
What do you think of this haiku?
I really like it
it depicts the hue of dusk
how clever you are
Reply:I love the imagery and the addition of a pleasent scent. Very calming.
Reply:This is a perfect little gem that follows all rules regarding form and content. Now, write one for us in Japanese.
Reply:its a little weird to be honest but it doesn't matter wht I think
Reply:I like it. It reminds me of a desert sunset.
flowers funeral
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